Scientense

(167 words, 39-second read)

When talking about writing, nouns, verbs, adverbs, propositions, and commas get a lot of play. Not so much for verb tenses.

Why it matters: According to Jonah Berger’s new book, Magic Words, the tense – past or present – can impact your persuasiveness.

After analyzing a million online reviews, Jonah’s team determined:

Past tense does us a couple of things:

  • It tells us something was true at one point but doesn’t tell us if it is true now.
  • It adds subjectivity because it’s based on an opinion at the moment.

Present tense gives us a different impression:

  • It tells us something is still happening and will continue to happen.
  • It removes subjectivity because it is actively happening.

In action 🎬:

  • John played a good game. But will it happen again?
  • John plays a good game. Suggesting it will happen again.

Bottom line: Writing in the present tense increases the chance of our audience reading our stuff.

Fun fact: This section of the book was about 1,200 words.

Another fun fact: The first draft was 200 words.